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如果我有200萬，我會認真仔細的思考如何運用這筆錢
首先我會把這筆錢的３／２拿去銀行存,再來會與家人分享,買他們所想要的東西送他們
我會把少許的錢,用去做風險性低的投資
我個人認為擁有這筆錢時,我能幫助許多人,我會捐錢到慈善機構,最後我會想出國旅遊,去知名的國家探索體驗當地的文化
If I own Two million dollars, Will hard and cautiously consider how to make use of this money
First I will take 3/2(two over three) of this money first the bank save
The second i'll share it with my family. Buy the thing that they want to send them
I will use few money to do the investment of low risk
I personally think that, I can help many people while owning this money, I will donate money to charity
and finally I would like to travel abroad , to explore the famous country ,Can experience local culture.
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首先我會把這筆錢的３／２拿去銀行存,再來會與家人分享,買他們所想要的東西送他們
我會把少許的錢,用去做風險性低的投資
我個人認為擁有這筆錢時,我能幫助許多人,我會捐錢到慈善機構,最後我會想出國旅遊,去知名的國家探索體驗當地的文化
If I do have 2 millions dollars, I will seriously consider how to make a good use of this. First of all, two third of which will deposit into the bank and then I will share with my family to buy things that they have been dreaming for a long time. I will also spend some money for low risk investment. Individually, I think I may help many people as well as donation to charity.
Finally, I will spend for travel and to explore different cultures of some famous countries.
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