srw wrote:嗯,的確,多謝指教。我以後會更注意這類的用法把所指稱的名詞直接翻出來的。
應該這樣說,在同一篇文章之中,英文可以用不同的名詞來指涉同一個事物,翻譯者一開始就要確認其共同指涉的對象,再決定是不是要用不同的名詞來指稱,畢竟不同的指稱名詞所突顯的重點不同,能反映出各名詞之間的不同當然最好。
這篇評比是三個不同品牌小跑車的比較,使用"the Toyota"來指稱86是這類型文章常見的用法。。
是這個大頭 wrote:這一段我非常確定我翻得完全正確而你完全翻錯了。首先你的斷句就錯了:despite its focus(儘管它強調(前一句的操控))是一個帶有轉折意思的子句,接下來的it rides well, and the cabin is comfortable才是主要的句子,講的是雖然它強調操控卻沒有因此犧牲行路舒適性與車室的舒適度,而最後的if a little dated(略顯陳舊)是修飾cabin,使用if作介系詞則是一種弱語氣、加個小但書的補飾法。
cc 樓主應該是愛死 86 了, 難怪會有人認為你是工讀生, 我英文不好, 但也可以
看出樓主許多翻譯上的 "偏愛", 就例如 86 的一段:
Yet despite its focus it rides well, and the cabin is comfortable
, if a little dated.
樓主是翻譯成:
然而儘管它強調的是操控,其行路與座艙的舒適性卻都非常好,只是內裝的鋪陳略顯
陳舊而已。
我就會翻成:
雖然 86 好開容易上手, 座艙設計也很就手, 但感覺就是有那麼一點老氣過時.
(印象中英國人嘴都很賤, 就算她們真的這麼認為也不用大驚小怪啦)
歡迎你也來學習正確的英文。愛86的是寫這篇評比的作者,我只是儘量忠實地翻譯出他所表達的意思而已。
Leo 555 wrote:有人規定在引用一篇專業試駕集評之前一定要先親自試駕過裡面的每一款車才能作引用嗎?別搞笑了。如果你覺得這篇集評的論點與你的看法不同,你大可發表你個人的觀點與經驗,而不是批評引用的人為何完整引用集評的內容。朋友的G35我試開過,運轉精緻度如各方評論所言相當不錯,但擴缸為3.7L之後我就一直沒機會接觸到,只是各地的專業車評都有對其高轉速時的運轉品質作出VQ35時代所沒有的批評是不爭的事實,以下我再提供幾個專業車評給你作參考:
是嗎? 你都開過??
35, 37你都擁有並且開過?
麻煩您看文自爽86就好, 86最最最最強了
http://www.topgear.com/uk/nissan/370z/road-test/v6
"The one thing I didn't like about the drivetrain is the excessive vibration you feel through the gearstick when you are thrashing the car... which is all the time. Above 5,000rpm, the engine really starts to get rough and transmits some nasty vibes back to the transmission. It's not a huge problem, but the coarseness doesn't gel well with the rest of the car."
http://www.oncars.com/news-blogs/story/418/Nissan-370Z-Part-3-Performance-Review
"Unfortunately, the rough character of the VQ-engine series at elevated RPM is still present in this latest 3.7-liter version, making the 370Z sound and feel a bit strained when you really hustle it."
http://www.cargurus.com/Cars/2012-Infiniti-G37-Overview-c23139
"The 3.7 is nowhere near as refined as rival offerings, and presents a rough, unbalanced profile as the revs climb. Noise and vibrations increase to aggravating levels – especially considering the class and competition – and are at their worst right in the meatiest part of the power curve."
( 奇怪!! 本田最近也出了1台雙門的帥氣跑車,還多了一套油電系統,可惜沒被納入評比中...
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