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lichanghua5566

0分

21樓

lichanghua5566

個人積分：0分

文章編號：43893585

反正IELTS 的test 1 上網google一下模板到處都是，反正超一下就有6.5分了。話說就是這樣一堆人大學的paper 連p都拿不到XDD

beautysmile

28分

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beautysmile

個人積分：28分

文章編號：43897092

天使水果糖 wrote:
150個字?它有規定...(恕刪)

英文高手，可以請您將此回文，用英文再表達一次嗎@@a

天使水果糖

813分

23樓

天使水果糖

個人積分：813分

文章編號：43897259

beautysmile wrote:

英文高手，可以請您將此回文，用英文再表達一次嗎@@a...(恕刪)

可以啊~~~ 可是好累，去看我的回應人家GMAT的那一個樓吧，有一定實力的不需要特別過來為你証明些什麼，因為我並沒有要從你身上得到任何好處

Yiyans

199分

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Yiyans

個人積分：199分

文章編號：43899089

**The bar chart clearly shows the transformation of the economic structure in the United Kingdom in the 20th century.

**The backbone of the UK economy in the early 1900s was agriculture. Back then approximately 50 per cent of the “kingdom” was supported by farming.

**Agriculture and manufacturing were the major earners in the first half of the century accounting for close to, if not over, 90 per cent of the contribution.

**The trend shifted in the last five decades of the 20th century.

**Manufacturing showed a gradual decline.

**Agriculture took a drastic fall between 1950 and 1975. It later shrunk to a mere 2 to 3 %.

**However, businessmen in the finance sector of the UK markets took off on a path that provided vivid contrast to the bumpy ride of the farmers.

**Great Britain, once an agricultural empire revolutionized itself into a business nation in the course of 100 years.

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一些想法

還有些比較不適合IELTS T1的詞彙

不知道有沒有typo，加油