明天要去四大CPA FIRM面試
真的很緊張
剛剛在準備英文
可是不知道這樣講到底好不好
想說01上神人眾多
應該有人可以給我點意見
所以在這邊獻醜了


good morning everyone
my name is XXX
I major at accounting and information system in XXXX
I am a harworking responsible and diligent person
I like reading running and shopping
I am very honored to have this interview
I really want to get this job and I hope I can see you soon
thank you


一直III是不是很不好也很多餘啊?
我也不確定他會不會要求英文自介
但多準備一下應該是可以的吧

請大家賜教
2011-12-13 22:12 #1

小強林 wrote:
明天要去四大CPA ...(恕刪)



good morning everyone
my name is XXX
my major is accounting and information system and graduated at XXXX
I am a hardworking responsible and diligent person
I like to read book, do exercise and go shopping in my free time.
I am very honored to have this interview.
I really want to reach your entry requirement and get this job.
I hope I can see you soon <==這句不知道你的意思
thank you

這是我本月回的最認真的一次

小強林 wrote:
明天要去四大CPA ...(恕刪)

副詞多用吧,比較不會一直唉唉唉的.....
major at似乎不是用來接科目 major in才是。
而且一路I到底,挺怪的~

小強林 wrote:
明天要去四大CPA ...(恕刪)


" I hope I can see you soon" ---那就等通知, we will keep you informed.

網路上很多自我介紹文可以抄....
我明年才畢業
所以沒有用graduated改用major....in

一直用III
真的蠻奇怪的

最後一句想表達的是
我希望我很快就可以再見到你這樣


哈哈哈哈哈
我好緊張唷
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小強林 wrote:
明天要去四大CPA ...(恕刪)


我不評論你的英文(有一些錯誤,你自己要好好檢查),但內容對人資來說滿空洞的。

你說到你是很努力且有責任感的人,但是證據咧?你最好先講 During the past few years, I have done xx project/programme which increase firm's performance in terms of xxx. 如果有論文,你可以說 In the last year of my university life, I did an empirical research on xxx. In this research process, I meet many experts in xxx field. And I learnt a lot from them. For instance, xxx

另外 I like reading running and shopping. 公司不會想知道你喜歡購物,這點不需要講。倒是閱讀你可以跟學習做連結,表示你不會因為畢業了或工作了,技能就停滯不前。你可以說 I quite like reading. For example, recently I read a book about xxx (你的領域的某本書), I found that xxx (心得)。

I really want to get this job and I hope I can see you soon。這是客套話,每個人都會講。你改成As I said earlier, I have got many skills in doing xxx work. Therefore, I believe I am the one who qualifies this job.

記得,interview 不是自我介紹,而是要把自己的特質跟工作做連結關係,在短短一兩分鐘內,要把你的優點通通說出來。

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Good morning everyone
My name is XXX
It is my pleasure (to have this opportunity) to be invited for this interview.
Let me introduce myself to you briefly.
I major in accounting and information system in XXXX and will graduate next year.
Reading, Running and Shopping are the most things I do in my spare time.
I also have diligent and responsible attitudes when things come to me.
Hope I could have chance to join your company in near future.
Thank you.

小魚111 wrote:
我不評論你的英文(有...(恕刪)



好專業
但首先我明年才要畢業
我沒有論文也沒有相關的工作經驗
所以第一段.....
我也在想要怎麼在短短幾分鐘之內講些甚麼
而且又要能夠說出個人特質
要進CPA FIRM
不就是要耐操耐磨好凍頭
這些我都有阿
但又要怎麼證實?


我只怕多講多錯

謝謝你


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ahkunchan wrote:
野人獻曝一下!Goo...(恕刪)



你的也很厲害
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